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You.
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I will hate you
Till the day I die
You betrayed me
And hurt me unmercifully
I only hope
That I'm there
To watch you fall
As someone you trust
Does what you did to me
I want to watch you cry
The way you made me
I want to watch you rot in hell
For what you did
May you never have another
Peaceful night
Without your conscience
Tormenting your every thought
Look at me
Do you see my face?
Do you see my pain?
Etch this face into your memory
Because it is the last memory of me
That you'll have.
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Re: You.
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by Mesano on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:22:40 PM AEST
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all i can say is that i knew there would be a lot of emotion and anger in this poem just by the title... im very sorry for whatever happened, but look on the bright side, a great poem came out of it :)
the best advice i have for you is all my poem called The Truth...
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Re: You.
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:29:37 PM AEST
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Whoa. Being hurt by someone you love and trust is probably the single most emotionally painful experience possible . . . and this poem conveys every inch of how it feels. The emotional anguish emanates from it, nearly.
Disturbing, vivid, powerful, emotional, poignant . . . beautiful.
hoping brighter tomorrows come your way,
Nora |
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Re: You.
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:37:33 PM AEST
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I feel the raw emotions coming out of this..but believe me...it's better to forget that person..
Have a great Christmas....
Jenni |
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Re: You.
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:22:47 PM AEST
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| revenge and hate eat you away... |
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Re: You.
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by GothicHollie on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:37:50 PM AEST
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"May you never have another
Peaceful night
Without your conscience
Tormenting your every thought
Look at me
Do you see my face?
Do you see my pain?"
Great poem.. i've been wanting to write something like that for a very long time.... I've experienced that before... And it still kills me today...
Once again Great job |
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Re: You.
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by pixie on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:04:48 AM AEST
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our raw emotions can make for great poems, this was well expressed, deep poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: You.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:47:26 PM AEST
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| Sometimes some of the best works of art come out of anger and frustration. Great job! |
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Re: You.
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by Kimmie_mac on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 11:48:16 PM AEST
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| great poem I believe we can all relate to this poem. Love hurt betrayal. Kim |
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