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Troubled Childhood
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:00:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Whiskey breath
Sand paper voice
It’s hard enough
Making this choice
Cheap cigarettes
Hurting lies
As sad as you look
I have to say good bye
Just please stand back
And let me go
Your love I can’t see
You won’t let it show
If it’s just a disguise
Wipe these tears
From my eyes
I won’t help you stand so
Stop grabbing my hand
You kept me captive
Soul filled with strife
I won’t be troubled no more
If I just end my life
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2004-12-22 20:00:12]
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Re: Troubled Childhood
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by greeneyes on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:31:42 PM AEST
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Very powerful words.
Nancy |
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Re: Troubled Childhood
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:26:25 PM AEST
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| wow, powerful.. well done |
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Re: Troubled Childhood
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST
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Tragic and emotional this write. Nicely done.
peace
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Re: Troubled Childhood
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by pixie on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:06:29 AM AEST
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a very emotional and powerful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Troubled Childhood
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:05:36 AM AEST
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Very sad but written awesomely well.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
I pray this is jus writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Troubled Childhood
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:14:05 PM AEST
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| Hey haven't heard from you in awhile i miss talking to you..ok now for the comments.....This was a very powerful write by you...but i did not like the end...but you did do an extremely good job |
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