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Why Did You Leave?
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:40:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The couch still smells of you
From when you would sleep there
When you needed a place to stay
The refrigerator still has your junk in it
It’s moldy now
And stinks really bad
Your jacket is still in my closet
Exactly where you left it
Gathering dust
I couldn’t bare to change a thing
Every imperfection I thought I hated
Is everything I miss
The way my rug would have mud tracks
How you always left the seat up
The way you would always be late
Or the way you called
At three in the morning
Just to say hi
Why did you have to leave me behind
Why did I not follow you
Why have you left me here while you go to a better place
Copyright ©
EverlastingDawn
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2004-12-22 18:40:37]
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Re: Why Did You Leave?
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by ForgottenTear on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:02:49 PM AEST
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I always found it funny, that when the one you love isnt there anymore you still miss their imperfection.
this poem really touched me
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Re: Why Did You Leave?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:32:50 PM AEST
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wow this is a sad and touching write.. goodbyes are hardest of all but you will heal in time awesome job in this writing though
peace and hope
JENNI |
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