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Crimson Tears
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 05:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My body is crying
Crimson tears fall from the wound
That his gun inflicted on me
Thanks to his hate
I am lying here
Reminising over my life
As the pain drives me to death
Why had he hurt me?
I think over anything I did
That could have made my own flesh and blood
Turn to murder
I hear sirens
They are coming to try to save me
To bad I can't stay
All I have left is my memory
And that is what pushes me to say
"Don't forget me."
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2004-12-22 17:21:38]
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Re: Crimson Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:13:14 PM AEST
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| This was a very nice write. It was short and to the point the way I usually like my poems. Nice job. |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:46:24 PM AEST
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| This poem is sad, it's ashame to think that things like that really do happen. |
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