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Alone
Contributed by
kt88
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 04:39:28 PM in AEST
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I am all alone
Sitting at home
Looking around
I don't feel the ground
Now i'm in the sellar
Looking for my liquor
I'm back in the kitchen
I see five bottels sitting there
I strat to feel quizy
It's very uneasy
AS yellow and brown chunks come up
A few hours later i strat to wake up
It's been a full year today
We must go and celabrate
We shall head to the bar
The end of my life isn't to far
So take my advise
Take a class
Before you pass
Copyright ©
kt88
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2004-12-22 16:39:28]
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Re: Alone
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 04:53:04 PM AEST
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OMG....LOL LOL... This is a greta poem
godbless, keep up the good work :) |
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Re: Alone
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by sean88 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 05:15:26 PM AEST
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Very nice..only one bad point though, the spelling mistakes :s! But as i said, very good!
Best wishes
Sean |
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Re: Alone
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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| please work on your spelling? thanks.. |
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