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My revenge
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 04:39:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I rise from my grave, Knowing what i need to do
I see your house, You are alone
I crave my revenge, you took away my life
I will make sure you pay as i enter your room
You enjoyed it, ruthlessy killing others
Now its your turn, to die like an animal
Dont be scared, your passage will be quick
I will show no mercy, as you have before
You now regret it, there is no forgiveness
You see the knife, ready to take your life
You know begging is useless
I will make sure you feel the pain
You start to cry as i draw my weapon
I start to laugh at your hypocrisy
I start the act, the act you enjoyed in the past
All hope is gone you lose consciouseness
I start to clean, Your cold dirty blood
It is the blood of a tyrant
You will not be missed
My revenge is also my liberator
I walk back to the cemetary, I see my grave
I can now rest in peace as i close the coffin door
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Re: My revenge
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by ShadowsLuster on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:45:00 AM AEST
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| That's some cold poetry right there, but thats a strong feeling, and if that's what you were going after, GOOD JOB!!! LOL The feel was very powerful and I liked it. nice =) |
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Re: My revenge
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by poorgirl on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 07:26:51 PM AEST
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| This is not good..Your are drifting off and using to many types of poor word usage..Check The English Dictionary please..Or try your hand at another hobby. |
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