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Alone
Contributed by
heartbroken_chick
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 03:28:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The Day I Remeber Kissing You And Feeling Your Body Close To Mine,
All The Things I Felt For You, I Thouht Our Closeness Was A Sign,
Our Memories Keep Me Happy, But Our Break Up Causes Pain,
From All The Times We Spent Together It Feels Now U Played Me Like A Game,
I Wish I Could Hold You Tight And Make Everything In My Life Right,
Is All This My Fault? Or Is All This Urs?
You Helped Me But KIlled Me, You Opened Then Shut My Doors,
The Pain No Longer Can I Take Nor The Sadness In My Heart,
Can We Just Do It Again? We Can Take It From The Start,
I Remeber Lying In My Bed, Deciding What Should I Do Dial Ur Number And Say I Love You,
Or Wait For You To Say The Words When I Pick Up My Phone,
Now I Realize Theres No More Waiting And No More Love For Me..
You Left Me Here Alone.
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2004-12-22 15:28:44]
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Re: Alone
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 04:34:33 PM AEST
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| you are pretty good for someone so young.... keep writing, you just get better with time! |
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Re: Alone
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by forgottenone_iam on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:51:18 PM AEST
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| That was a very cute poem. keep writing |
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Re: Alone
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by pleasure_is_pain103 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:35:14 PM AEST
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| that was really good- and i don't want to say that your too young but seriously guys your age aren't mature enough to love, and anyone older is too mature for you- you don't wanna grow up to fast...you miss so much happiness in your early teens, just be happy with yourself before you try to find someone else to be happy with |
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