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I've cried a Thousand tears
Contributed by
Lauryen
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 02:09:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ive cried a thousand tears
for only you cant see
The love i have for you
is the love i want you to have for me.
Whenever I am near you
I feel so good and free
I will love you till our dying day
You will soon beable to see.
I will show you through my actions
I will show you through my words
I will show you through my ways of looking at you
My love for you will soon be herd.
You are mine
but yet i still seem to cry
you have made me who i am today
If you wereto leave me i seriously think id die
You are everything ive wanted
Everything in my life
If you begin to love me
Maybe i could end up your wife.
I lOVE YOU MARCUS JAMES PAYNE!!!!!
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Lauryen
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2004-12-22 14:09:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I've cried a Thousand tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ashley_07 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 03:46:10 PM AEST (User
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Very good, you could change a few words so it flows better, but it sounds great. |
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