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Without You
Contributed by
LilGnefkow
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I thought things would get better if I just let go
But my world came to an end
And I got nothin' left to show
All I need is a friend
Why did I do this, how could I?
I can't handle this anymore
And the hardest part is goodbye
Now I am so unsure
I don't know what I can do
How to stop the pain
This is hard, I feel it too
But only God can stop the rain
Only He can make the choice
And I don't know what it will be
Just listen for the voice
Close your eyes, and you will see
I don't know if this is goodbye
And I don't know if I'm ok
I'm doing my best not to cry
This is the only way
Copyright ©
LilGnefkow
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2004-12-22 12:35:32]
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Re: Without You
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:36:35 PM AEST
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a very sad farewell poem, greatly expressed
pixie xx |
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Re: Without You
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by supergirlblibs on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:01:42 PM AEST
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| Its good! i can kinda relate to it at the moment too! keep it up x |
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Re: Without You
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by GodisGreat3842 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:31:40 PM AEST
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Hey hun, that's really good! I'm proud of you, stay strong.
-Em |
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