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***last good-bye***

Contributed by livingdeath on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I look back at what we used to have....
no other couple was so happy and close...
I allways felt that we were gonna last a lifetime....
but our paths have gone apart....
the love that for u i had...
has banished from my heart....
now i see that you failed me as i failed you..
i'm very confused....
for i feel that i did all in my power to make it happen...
and that you didn't undestand my emotions...
but today i see that we were both wrong..
we were not singin the same song...
i will allways cherish the happy moments we spent together....
i will allways remember our smile and your cute loving voice....
i will forever have in my heart the sweet kisses and the honest hugs...
but know that for me you're now just my past....
i loved you one time....
we failed at trying, now that i'm gone and that you really don't mean nothing anymore...
i can tell you that i loved you with all that i had....
and that it's really so damn sad...
but i found someone that can love as i love her...
that can be true about herself....
that doesn't have to be another person to feel accepted.....
a person that has grown stronger from her life problems...
a person that knows what she wants....
i just wanted you to know that at last i'm happy......
and that i hope that you find that someone to be happy to....
this is the last goodbye....
just remember that we would allways have.... our infinite past.

so long....

bye,bye.

Copyright Â© livingdeath ... [ 2002-11-30 10:00:00]
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Re: ***last good-bye*** (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 02:37:14 PM AEST
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This is so sad and beautiful at the same time, it made me cry so hard. I've felt this way before about the person i had been with, and things had gone so wrongly and both our hearts were broken so badly. It' really makes you wonder what went wrong in the relationship because both people's points of views are so different. I am glad you got to a point in your life that you could say good bye to this part of your life, and that you found someone who loves you as you love her. I wish you all the luck my friend, this one really captured my heart pretty hard. Beatuiful write...
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