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Everyone Else Left Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:45:21 AM in AEST
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Everyone else has left me, but not you,
You made a promise & you’re seeing it through,
You said you would stand by me & you have,
You’ve been the one to make me again laugh.
I want you to know I am grateful indeed,
You have made my wounds cease to bleed,
It has been hard for you coping with me,
Sometimes I am selfish & that I fail to see.
I am sorry for that I love you to bits,
You have helped me climb out of my pits,
Been there to help me overcome my fears,
I love being with you & having you near.
Our love is so strong & unbreakable,
The bond between us is un-miss able,
People have promised they wouldn’t leave before,
But they always run as they head for the door.
Your love is clear to see as you have stayed,
Not let my depression have you swayed,
It will be hard to overcome but we’ll get there together,
I love you as you have promised me a chance of forever.
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pixie
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2004-12-22 11:45:21]
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Re: Everyone Else Left Me
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:50:04 AM AEST
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| It's nice to have a true friend, or love..someone to see things thru with..when things are black.. nice write..great actually. |
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Re: Everyone Else Left Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:51:24 AM AEST
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A very sweet write. Hope he appreciates it.
Cheers! J. |
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Re: Everyone Else Left Me
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by Evilnn on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:17:20 PM AEST
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Nicely done
very nice poem |
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Re: Everyone Else Left Me
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:29:19 PM AEST
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You got a special thing there pixie. Nice scribe reflecting the emotions.
peace
TS |
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Re: Everyone Else Left Me
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 02:15:13 PM AEST
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aww,well i'm sorry that everyone has left u,but this 1 inparticular person,it sounds like he or she really loves u and cares about u,but i promise i will not leave u,i love u,in that friendly way.i can relate to this,but that 1 person like everyone else has left me just recently on october 28th,he promised me that he would stay right through everything and anything but then something came up and he just got up and left and i miss him,he stayed with me for so long,but i know he was just scared that he couldnt help me but he wanted to,well to be honest i dunno if thats true but i'm just gonna make myself think that so i dont cry everynight again,anyways great write i really liked it,keep it up ur an awesome writer!!
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