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i want to
Contributed by
xbleedingheart
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:58:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i want to go to bed
i want to go to sleep
i want to feel your kiss on my cheek
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xbleedingheart
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2004-12-22 06:58:16]
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Re: i want to
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by wray on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 07:25:09 AM AEST
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| I really quite like this because of its simplicity. The rhythm of the final line could be patched up though, maybe. |
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Re: i want to
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:02:35 AM AEST
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Aww that was so sweet, even tho its a little short you got your message accross.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: i want to
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by tractorbabe on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:54:51 AM AEST
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| i liek it short sweet and to the point |
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