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Finders Keepers
Contributed by
spike
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:00:25 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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I found
The swiftness of time and I raced it
I found
love in my heart and embraced it
I found
strength in my body and flexed it
I found
misery in my bones and I hexed it
I found
the beast within and I tamed it
I found
the enemy without and I shamed it
I found
anger in my voice and I said it
I found
the wisdom of the ages and read it
I found
the secret of happiness and sang it
I found
The bell to sound change and I RANG IT!!
I found
the right path for me and I walked it
I found
The elixir of life and I corked it
I found
The centre of my pain and I smote it
I found
beauty in words, so I wrote it.
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spike
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2004-12-22 06:00:25]
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Re: Finders Keepers
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:47:34 AM AEST
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"I found
beauty in words, so I wrote it."
You sure did. Again and again!
Great job spike. I like this style of poetry. Kinda straight
to the point poetry. And a point well taken!
You never disappoint.
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Re: Finders Keepers
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:39:35 AM AEST
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Interesting style spike. Straight to the point and beautiful.
peace
TS |
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Re: Finders Keepers
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:59:29 PM AEST
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Oh! how I envy your clarity! This is terrific. And those capital letters - my! how potent they are. I think I heard the bell from here...
I suspect the straightforwardness of this is reflective of the moment in which you wrote it. It must have been one very big moment!
Again --- well, well done!
SNM |
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Re: Finders Keepers
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:22:12 AM AEST
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| Awesome write. Full of hope. |
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