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beautiful snow
Contributed by
holy
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 03:40:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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beautiful snow
beautiful snow fly over and fly over
my eyes feel so bright
singing a sweeter song to my husband
i love you more than i said
you take me into a mythic small island
we are walking hand in hand
i look at our stepping breathe gently
you hold my body breathe in salubrious air merrily
"dear ,you look like the snow beautiful and absorbing
i felt you like a old friend at the first meeting"
you say and cuddling me tight
as the pretty snow i am in best mood and spirit
remember you told me you love me since first eyes meeting
remind me that date we have ever
today our love as the great snow flying and flaping
what can i say only lay my head in your chest smile and talking
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holy
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2004-12-22 03:40:50]
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Re: beautiful snow
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:40:13 AM AEST
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aww that was lovely, I like looking at snow when I am inside in the warm lol great poem,
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Re: beautiful snow
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:12:33 AM AEST
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I miss looking at snow, i use to do snow angels all the time when i was younger, this is such a good poem. thanks for posting.
Hugs,
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Re: beautiful snow
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:57:17 AM AEST
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A tender write full of joy as one enjoys the winter weather so close to xmas.
peace
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