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Deep Within
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:18:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look upon these hand's
Hand's that show this grieving pain
Pain that runs deep within these veins
Veins that lie deep inside
Inside this cold body of mine
Copyright ©
blossomingcherry5353
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2004-12-21 22:18:48]
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Re: Deep Within
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by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:30:51 AM AEST
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| very weird but makes u think in a way |
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Re: Deep Within
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:56:19 AM AEST
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Brilliant. It is different but I really understand. Good write.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: Deep Within
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:57:24 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point. Great work. :-) |
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