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Time
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
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Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 09:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Seeing what I saw before.
Before the clock left time.
Time of love and happy endings.
Endings that slowly went by.
By, and by they all will leave.
Leave the memories behind.
Behind the sorrow and all of the tears.
Tears that were seen through my eyes.
Copyright ©
blossomingcherry5353
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2004-12-21 21:53:53]
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Re: Time
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by AsILayDying on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:12:30 PM AEST
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This is really sweet w00t w00t
I'm gonna read your other stuff |
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Re: Time
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:06:57 AM AEST
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I liked this. It says alot in few words. Time gone past, and memories with it. Whether good or bad. Kudos to you.
Peace
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:58:56 PM AEST
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| Sweet write. I really like it. |
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