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Ripping a hole in my pocket

Contributed by Levymetal on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I dont wanna be the killer if i've never even killed before
I dont wanna be the butt of all your jokes unless i laugh
I keep one hand in my pocket to keep me from losing it..
Its too much for me and i dont know how to handle this
Twenty four hours and im still where i stood before
Watched friends walk by without trying to compromise my own position
"Its all relevant" you say as you drive so far away.

I dont wanna be the injury if i have to hurt somebody
I dont wanna be the third wheel unless you needed a spare tire
I dont think i could stand this much longer
My best friend is my lighter and i dont even smoke..ironic?

Twenty four hours and im still here in this frame
Let me out of this stupidity-im restless
I count the times you go in and out of my head
In and out, in and out, and out and out and away you go...

I dont wanna be the creator if i have to think of ideas
I dont wanna be the "secret" unless it turns to gossip
I think its time you took your big ego out to show
I want to break down somewhere, somehow right now

Twenty four hours ago and twenty four more to go
You are the train of thought and i just lost mine...

I grab my shower curtains and tear them down in fear
I thought i heard you unlocking the front door
Yes, it would be funny if you showed up randomly
Yes, i would be happy...god damn that sucks
Hear i am on my bathroom floor in a towel
Soaked not in soap but just sweat of sickness
I promised i wouldnt be emotional like all them *****
But...here it comes and i cant help but cry
Forget brushing my hair today-it'll only be a waste of time
Put on the same clothes and everything will work out fine
The streets seem empty but thats just because the silence
I shove my hand in my pocket to keep from losing it...
And i find my unused metal plated lighter
Good friends in bad times-ironic? No just unheard of

Copyright © Levymetal ... [ 2004-12-21 20:16:49]
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Re: Ripping a hole in my pocket (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:30:32 PM AEST
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Sometimes people need a good beatdown ... at least verbally! I'm sure many can relate to the emotions flowing here, I know I can. People can be so cruel! Wonderful write, however there were a few typos that happen to most people.

peace
TS

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