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Tell-Tale Orbs
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
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Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:10:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I stared into those eyes
And I saw one thing
Love
Not from adoration
Nor passion
But the pure simple love
A love someone would do anything for
Make the impossible
Possible
Give someone the power to move mountains
Reconfigure the stars
Capture the moon
And conquer the world
A look someone would live for
Or die for that matter
Whatever was wished
That look that
Was directed to me
And only me
Copyright ©
EverlastingDawn
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2004-12-21 18:10:03]
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Re: Tell-Tale Orbs
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:54:36 PM AEST
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Love the title to this! It's a wonderful feeling, to have a look such as that directed you. Simplistic grace that speaks more than what is written here.
peace
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Re: Tell-Tale Orbs
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:30:41 PM AEST
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| I had that look...once. great write. |
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Re: Tell-Tale Orbs
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:33:06 PM AEST
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| excellent, I love the simplicity of this |
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