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The Family Loft
Contributed by
Levymetal
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Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:47:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Jane and i are breaking the lock
Out of the barn and away from the loft
A race with the moon and a glimse behind
Nobody will notice i left just in time
I cant seem to feel anything real!
Dont blame me daddy, its just the way i was raised
Among the animals and now i grew out of that phase
Of barking on command im now the hunter
If winters a little cold this year more then usual..
Nobody would be surprised.
Jane and I are running barefoot to the lake
Away from our routine life increased with pain
Careful not to wake the morning or the dead
Quickly into the lake where i shall lay my head
I cant seem to feel anything real!
Please dont hate me daddy, its just the way i am
Your hurdle of sheep i didnt mean to kill
All one thousand of them hung on the ceilings by nails
I wouldnt be surprised if winter comes early this year..
Nobody would feel the least bit moved.
I cant seem to shake the erge of hate
Im sorry for what i did but theres no regret
Sacraficial offerings i gave to you out of rage
Pure as their birth until they choke
I cant seem to feel anything real...
Now im stabbing rusted nails into my temples
Stab stab you bastard, its not worth a damn
I just cant see anything real worth feeling.
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Levymetal
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2004-12-21 17:47:00]
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Re: The Family Loft
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:04:15 PM AEST
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Like how this leaves the reader wondering what exactly the person did *WEG*
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Re: The Family Loft
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 03:06:05 AM AEST
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Its intriguing, yes. Disturbing? Perhaps - the thousand sheep nailed to the ceiling seems a slightly preposterous image for my imagination to consume without a comedic burp or two.
I mean, wouldn't you get very bloody doing that?
Anyway - welcome to YPDC.
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