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°°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Why couldn't you hear me when i said i love you
My heart it's painfully aching it's now black and blue
I would have died the worst death ever made known
Just to have your arms around me, and help our love grow
Why couldnt you hear me when i said you were mine
My heart couldnt take you always needing "Your time"
I couldnt bare to hear, how you'd end your life soon
It hurt like a knife, cutting into my womb..
Why couldnt you hear me when i said i'd die for you
My heart always wanted, to grow old with only you
I wish i never heard how you loved her in your heart
It cut like a razor, you burned your black mark...
Why couldnt you hear me when i said be honest with me
Even if it hurt, i wouldnt have given up on thee
I thought you were a man filled with honor and pride
Of the hurtful things you'd been through in your life
Why couldnt you hear me when i was talking calm
You asked me to mother your children, to be their mom
I love those kids still this very day they to me are mine
But i know now that won't happen in this wretched lifetime
Why couldn't you hear me with your new love at your side
I hope she's worth all the reasons you tossed us all aside
I beleived in you more than i beleived in life so cold
But i thank you in the end, you've created in me a black mold..
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OreO
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2002-11-30 05:30:00]
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by Fwog on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 07:31:20 PM AEST
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OreO
You just keep doing it girl.
You have been there and your words tell it all.
Another beautiful write,
You really Rock.
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by Necronomy on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 01:17:29 AM AEST
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that's really sad Oreo, but you've done a great job of letting your feelings show here, nice work. we may never know why some people do the things they do..
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 05:12:24 PM AEST
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Oreo,this really touched me,Some people just dont get it why men do these things!
One day maybe! Good write!Your kids will thank you some day for sticking by them!
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by darkkai on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 07:50:25 PM AEST
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Damn OreO! no wonder you told me to keep it up. i got alot more for you read soon. now u keep it up.
Darkkai |
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by Smooth on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 12:00:23 AM AEST
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| wow. I loved this, so tragic, so achingly real. I can feel the sorrow in every word, and the tears that were shed behind them as well. This really touched me and made me want to wrap you with my soul like a blanket of comfort, and to dry your despair with the gossamer wings of an angel... but of course you could always just use your own. What's it like Oreo? Being an angel I mean... |
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 05:07:41 PM AEST
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| You grabbed my heart with this one Oreo. I have lived this poem. To give all and be tossed aside for another is an agony of the heart. As always..with every write of yours I read...I am more and more in awe of your talent. Another work of art my dear!! Larry :o) |
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 02:15:09 AM AEST
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Great write OreO! I don't see why a man would do such a thing... I know I wouldn't! for sure!!!
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 12:58:26 AM AEST
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| such a great poem . |
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 07:04:53 PM AEST
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| this was very touching and sad,, i know sometimes that kind of despair...i wanted you to know that i felt your pain in this poem very well written |
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Re: °°°Why Couldn't You Hear Me°°°
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by wordsy on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:45:26 PM AEST
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For every pain there is a gain. A soulful rendering, very touching.
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