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Waiting in torment
Contributed by
DanishPoet
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 04:12:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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State my drawbacks and tell me where i'm wrong.
Tell me so that, I can change what I've done.
I wish to change for you, tell me what you see.
What is that I do, what do you want from me?
I would change my life, turn to another road.
I just wish you wouldn't see me as the ugly toad.
I'd kill myself for you, jump off the nearest bridge.
Take a dip in the ocean, then walk into the fridge.
Just say it to me.
Tell me what you see.
You keep denieing and closing your eyes.
Please tell me - Where is it that your love lies?
If you told me once and for all,
It would be it; to stop my endless fall.
Fallen, lost, crawling and without glory.
That way do I wait, for our never-ariving lovestory.
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DanishPoet
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2004-12-21 16:12:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Waiting in torment
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:42:50 PM AEST (User
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I stopped here because I was drawn to your screen name, being a Danish poet myself - -
I think you have great sentiment here, and love is a big arena - full of sadness and joy -
Hope yours works itself out -
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