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What happened?
Contributed by
GodisGreat3842
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:36:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What happened?
What happened to us?
What happened to our friendship?
What happened to our love?
We used to be the best of friends,
I knew everything about you.
Now it seems we’re separated
By the seven seas.
I don’t know you anymore,
I merely know your name.
You’re never home to take my calls,
I’m always home to take your calls,
The ones that never come.
I thought we were best friends forever,
Nothing could bring us apart.
I really wish you would come back to me,
I don’t want to lose you,
I won’t let go.
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2004-12-21 15:36:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What happened?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 02:55:29 PM AEST (User
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this was borderline on redundancy. adding depth to this would make this overall better. seems like you are making statements, you arent writing poetry. |
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