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Personal Status
Contributed by
sean88
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:22:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Known by many,
Liked by some,
Loved by few,
I feel so glum,
Talk too many,
Replies by some,
Interest by few,
Feel so lonesome
Things were better,
But are in decline,
Friendships fade,
But only mine,
Told I’ll move on,
Meet someone new,
Breathe of fresh air,
Like morning dew
But morning comes,
And then again,
No morning dew,
But instead rain,
Things stay dark,
No light in sight,
My status goes,
Just over night
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-12-21 12:22:17]
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Re: Personal Status
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 03:51:00 AM AEST
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It's the plain truth. Ppl are so arrogant and do not want to admit these things. Great write ;)
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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Re: Personal Status
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by kt88 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:16:29 PM AEST
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i thought that you poem was very good. people can really relate in areas like that. i would like to see more.
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Re: Personal Status
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by supergirlblibs on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:22:11 PM AEST
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fantastic, again :P
play up pompey lol |
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Re: Personal Status
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:09:24 AM AEST
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Hmn. I find it tragically ironic that you should write a poem like this, and also, that you have included this (I quote) on your profilie page;
"Please read an comment on my poetry as i love to see peoples opinions on it!!!"
. . . when you have a paltry number of comments yourself. You say you'd be 'very grateful', but I don't see any return from you from those who've commented on all your poems in here - 3 comments isn't exactly what I'd call grateful.
Try selfishness for a start . . . |
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Re: Personal Status
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:12:21 AM AEST
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LOL!
and how did I miss this quote on your page??
" Always treat others how you wish to be treated yourself "
OMG! How unabashedly hypocritical!! |
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Re: Personal Status
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by supergirlblibs on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:59:00 AM AEST
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| I dont see how you can say that its pretty ironic to have written this poem, you dont know him so dont how do you know anything at all about him! I think its excellent again! xx |
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