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love not returned
Contributed by
Evilcaf
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Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I long to touch you, to tell you how I feel
But all I do is laugh and say,’ it’s no big deal ‘
We chat and joke, you tell me all your woes
My heart breaks but you will never know
The love I feel will never show
I try to keep my softness deep inside
That part which wants to say ‘I love you’
The part I know will never hold you
Or Kiss you, hold you in my arms
Though you beguile me with your charm
The love you feel is not for me
Somethings aren’t meant to be
Copyright ©
Evilcaf
... [
2004-12-21 12:02:56]
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Re: love not returned
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:19:26 PM AEST
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| good write and welcome i still dont think my attempts r to good just keep it up |
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Re: love not returned
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:42:59 PM AEST
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It is certainly a good first atttempt, though the word attempt always infers not quite managing something.
You managed to produce a good piece.
Keep writing
Steve |
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Re: love not returned
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:51:11 PM AEST
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Such a hard thing to deal with, emotions that are there and not returned. This comes from the heart. Keep writing!
peace
TS
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Re: love not returned
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:27:27 PM AEST
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| I think this is a great piece for being your first one. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: love not returned
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:35:39 PM AEST
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| A great piece...just like all of the rest u've written! keep writing...TD |
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