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Happily Infected
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:27:13 AM in AEST
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Whats left now
In this hollow cliche of a shadow
The sun shines through a cookie cutter angel
To shine loves effigy
A shadow in this world that covers feelings
The feelings of lost hearts, souls
Lost loves
Like shattered doves
But what are feelings without a congruence
I like to call them emotions
Emotions breaking the flood gate
Letting go the pent up, built up, held up
Flood of fragile tears
It seems nobody knows what emotions are anymore
But an unrelentlessly shattered heart
Would release them from the dam
Everyone is too afraid to love
Like love has become a disease
Like cancer
And I'm happily infected
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-12-21 10:27:13]
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Re: Happily Infected
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:08:41 PM AEST
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| Right on buddy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was fan-freakin-tastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is exactly what i was screamin in my most recent poem. i loved everyhting in here. the strange words, the honesty, the pain, and finally the great joy of knowing where you satnd in the midst of love. i know i as well am infected. this was spectacular, truly a masterpiece!!!!!!! kudos and a bow. |
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Re: Happily Infected
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:36:14 PM AEST
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Awesome, man.
I hope I will have more time to read now
and catch up with all you guys.
--G Moth |
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Re: Happily Infected
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:27:56 AM AEST
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Woah...
How come I haven't read this before? This is amazing.
Truly.
I have no idea what to say about it, but I love it. lol.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Happily Infected
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:15:21 AM AEST
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“The sun shines through a cookie cutter angel”
I particularly enjoyed deciphering this line.
Is this the representation of superficiality or perhaps something greater… perhaps the lack of emotion.
Angels are a popular reference in poems and such, yet you have broken the cliché and demonstrated a new concept, much like the effect of a pun.
Your poem is deep in value, highly expressive and significant.
I have attempted to express my emotions within many of my pieces, yet somewhat finding it difficult to pin-point specific feelings.
I really do fancy your words.
- Romanticist. |
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