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Backlashed Trip
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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On the quiet road west of me lays the end
of sunset. The amber cresent moon glows
like fire. Sparkled stars flicker from the heat
of earth. In the cover of darkness I drive alone
in the desert, tired of home and hurt by love,
Crushed and high strung. I run away from my
past lookin' for a bleak future. Failure is my
destiny. Spades linger in my mind.
Shaded futures past catches up in present
time. Death is waitin'. Can I leave now?
Copyright ©
darkkai
... [
2002-11-30 03:00:00]
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Re: Backlashed Trip
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 07:49:54 AM AEST
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My favorite line in this poem
is where it says "Shaded futures
past catches up in present". Tha's
absolutely beautiful. Thanks for
sharing this one i enjoyed it alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Backlashed Trip
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 02:51:46 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful...i love it so much...it's so subtle, sort of desperate, i don't know, but it's lovely... |
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