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HIS OWN DAUGHTER!!!
Contributed by
screwup
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:07:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I felt like I was dying
as his hand slipped further
down my body
in so much pain
I was screaming inside
no one could hear me
he looked in my eyes
one hand going deeper
the other grasped tight around my throat
then he pressed my body down
as I cried, he just shoved and pushed
further and harder it went in
I felt like I was dying
there was no way out
no escape... from hell
no escape from the burning pain
using a blade
to relieve the pain
tear stainded paths
as the pain is released
so much anger
locked up inside
HIS OWN DAUGHTER...
Copyright ©
screwup
... [
2004-12-21 07:07:52]
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Re: HIS OWN DAUGHTER!!!
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:12:22 AM AEST
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That was very grim and abit disturbing to read, I am so sorry for the pain you must of gone through. Dont let him beat you, try and keep strong *hugs*
a very pain filled write
pixie xx |
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Re: HIS OWN DAUGHTER!!!
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:03:13 PM AEST
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| I think it took great courage to write this. |
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Re: HIS OWN DAUGHTER!!!
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by Unspoken_Love on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:01:33 PM AEST
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| I am so sorry you had to go through that.. you must be a very strong person. May God be with you. |
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Re: HIS OWN DAUGHTER!!!
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:57:57 AM AEST
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| Deep and dark, sorry you had to go through such sickness, exceelnt poem, shwing such strength to post, hope you are ok, |
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