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You put it on me
Contributed by
bronze_phoenix
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Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:04:39 AM in AEST
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Let me tell you...
It was good, damn good!
I saw things and felt things I've never felt.
You brought me to a climax that was higher then the stratosphere.
Oh you sure did do it well, real well.
I clinched my toes; relaxed my bones and I let it go.
You made sure to get all the right places!
You put me into positions I've only seen in movies...
Oh, you sure did work me out!
It was a revelation; I realized that no one has ever done this to me!
No one has done what you've done and keep doing to me.
Oh...you did it over and over again. And I loved it!
It was new, some say taboo. But oh, I didn't mind.
Especially...when you came up from behind.
And when it was all done...I paid you!
Thank you chiropractor
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Re: You put it on me
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:15:34 AM AEST
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| you know i was expecting some clever ending from you and it was great writei love chiropractors hehehe |
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Re: You put it on me
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by noid_schizoid on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:57:10 AM AEST
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| you're naughty |
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Re: You put it on me
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by bluebird on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:23:30 AM AEST
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oh i havent read a poem like this for a long time. it brought tears to my eyes i was laughing that much.
thankyou so much.-it takes a bit to make me laugh
~keep the faith~
Bec |
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Re: You put it on me
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:13:30 PM AEST
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Excellent write!! You had me going there for a while...thanks for the laughs...
Jenni |
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Re: You put it on me
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:23:51 PM AEST
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| oh, you are just EVIL! |
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