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? CONFUSED ?
Contributed by
BEBE
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:49:46 AM in AEST
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TODAY I FEEL FREE
BUT AT THE SAME TYME I CAN ALSO DISSAGREE.
I FEEL HAPPY
BUT AT THE SAME TYME I FEEL REALLY CRAPPY.
IF ONLY I COULD FIND AN ESCAPE
I WOULD BE ABLE TO FEEL THE FEELING OF THE SEA SCAPE.
MAYBE I COULD RUN
BUT MAYBE I WILL JUST WALK
I FEEL CONFUSED
MAYBE I SHOULD JUST BE EXCUSED.
Copyright ©
BEBE
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2004-12-21 01:49:46]
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Re: ? CONFUSED ?
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:26:54 AM AEST
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| a good write but isnt writing your escape |
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Re: ? CONFUSED ?
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by girish on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:50:02 AM AEST
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good write
contentment that`s the key term for an escape. read my poems you will really find an escape.
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Re: ? CONFUSED ?
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:31:05 AM AEST
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| very interesting style and flow, good writing* |
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