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So in love with you
Contributed by
ForgottenTear
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:41:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I can read your thoughts
without looking into your eyes
I know you so well
I see past your lies
You're hiding behind granite
but your soul is behind glass
I will search high and low for you
and try to make you mine at last
I've tried to stop myself
but I always come running tearfully back
for my loneliness leads me to you
no matter how many times you made my heart crack
If its meant to be
I will forever wait
And God will determine
how strong is my faith
The mirage of loneliness
seems to make me say "I am so in love with you"
but i have a hard time believing an allusion
because my feelings for you will always be true
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ForgottenTear
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2004-12-20 23:41:58]
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Re: So in love with you
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by surge_joebot on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:46:32 PM AEST
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awww i know how that feels - its a good poem, you should be happy with how well you conveyed these emotions even tho it cant have been easy
good work
cheers
Demelza |
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Re: So in love with you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:29:06 AM AEST
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I can really relate to this poem, its so beautiful, so much feelings, I really enjoyed reading this, wow ...
~ Great Write ~ |
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Re: So in love with you
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:57:24 AM AEST
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yes this is a great write...u've done a good job and i can relate so well...loneliness makes us do silly things and im trying to get over heartbreak and sometimes it seems no words could ever describe what im feelin.
"The mirage of loneliness
seems to make me say "I am so in love with you" that sounded awesome. love it. good job |
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Re: So in love with you
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:50:27 AM AEST
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Aww that was so sweet, i so know what you mean by this.
Great Write.
Jane x |
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Re: So in love with you
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:31:44 AM AEST
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I feel like this about my boyfriend, this was such a wonderful and loving write
pixie xx |
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