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Vampire
Contributed by
adanawa
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your are my secret
my lonley one in the dark
troubled thought are our only bond
You feed of my storys
take pleasure in my pain
You smile when I cry
You are the only one
I can go to anymore
Please let this end
Take my life
take my pain
Let my soul soar
Copyright ©
adanawa
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2004-12-20 23:37:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Vampire
(User Rating: 1 ) by savedbydeath on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:45:07 PM AEST (User
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yet another great write,u must be a real interesting person in real life,wow i cant believe how wonderful of a writer u r,and u seem very young,wow,well keep it up,dont let that pain keep ya away from a pen and paper and the internet of course...so i can read,5 *'s for u again!!
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Re: Vampire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:20:56 AM AEST (User
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a dark poem after my own dark heart, very well done. |
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Re: Vampire
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:23:27 AM AEST (User
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Hmm pretty good vampire write.
good job. |
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Re: Vampire
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:52:37 AM AEST (User
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Thats a cute short Vampire poem, i really like it; mind you im not the vampire person lol. Great Write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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