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undelivered words
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:35:25 PM in AEST
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Lies
broken promises
scattered around me
things spoken that will be given to me
yet setting me free
Do you comprehend the cost?
do you even see what you could have lost?
They don't care
If I'm not there
as long as I'm in their shadows.. waiting
I make you happy
so to speak
yet your gone
as I lie and weep
I can't help but feel so used... so cheap
JENNI
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Re: undelivered words
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by Dominus on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:37:43 PM AEST
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| Nice work and yes I can relate to this poem. :) |
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Re: undelivered words
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:51:56 PM AEST
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| wow, i SO hear ya. well done. |
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Re: undelivered words
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:52:01 PM AEST
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wonderfully written and explain,most definitly i can relate,but what i do to help myself to feel better is forget about others and keep to myself,and try to bring myself up by bringing others up,it sometimes works,unless its ur childhood greatest enemy then it dont work so good,ppl will try alot to hurt 1 especially someone who is close they tend to hurt me alot bc they know they can and i guess thats what brings them up so whatever helps them i guess i can live with,so blah blah blah and more blah,great write,keep up the great work
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Re: undelivered words
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:05:49 AM AEST
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great write even though its sad
i know i could never treat some one that way and that i always know what i have and what i can lose |
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Re: undelivered words
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:54:17 AM AEST
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Jen this is such a sad write, very nicely done tho. Sometimes i feel like that and it feels like total crap. be strong sweety everything will work out soon.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: undelivered words
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:32:56 AM AEST
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Yes I can relate. that was a very good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: undelivered words
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:07:28 AM AEST
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Well done and again great power....You really should'nt feel down...people are people and many are lame and uncaring for the ones that care for them and, they are the ones loosing, not you.
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