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Breathe
Contributed by
princesadepoesia
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:12:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I loved you with all my breath but you suffocated me
You lifted me up then wanted to set me free
I lived in your cloud of smoke
Thinking I could clear the air
Too bad it was permanent
Now your sitting there all alone
Waiting for me to come home
But you’ll never get that chance again
If you had just let me breathe
We could have made it until the end
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2004-12-20 22:12:32]
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Re: Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:15:13 PM AEST
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| I like this. It's important for a couple to have their own individual space. Good job. :-) |
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Re: Breathe
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 02:21:04 AM AEST
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Aww this is lovely, writen so wonderfully. Great write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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