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Not Common
Contributed by
clandestine
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:16:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I have thoughts and values
I want you to know I care
I want to be heard no matter your hurtful words
I know what I want love to be
I know what it can bloom into
I see the mistakes and understand
Giving in may be easy but resistance is the challenge
We are given so many treasures so easy to lose
I can resist I can save but for who
I know I am not a lone but no one has a pot of gold
So in the end I am rare
All because I have thought and values and
I want you to know I care
Copyright ©
clandestine
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2004-12-20 21:16:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Not Common
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sonic_phoenix on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:09:46 AM AEST (User
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i like your concept. but your wording is a little awkward. but still a good poem
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