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Confusion
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 07:22:44 PM in AEST
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This life is filled with questions
That build up everyday
Yet I am already confused
So why place more in me to stay
My life is overwhelming
Leaving me unsure of how to feel
Everything I’ve ever known’s a lie
So can I be sure that this is real?
I don’t know why I act this way
With the happiness I feign
Pretending I’m content with life
Will upon me sorrow rains
And deep inside I’ve realized
That I’m in disarray
What used to bring me anger
Has a different effect today
And what used to bring me joy
Doesn’t anymore
And another questions burns within
“What is left to live for?
I thought that I’d be happy
With how my life turned out
But all this new found “happiness”
I have begun to doubt
I’ve grown envious for what
I cannot obtain
Yet the things that I do have
Only cause me bitter pain
I can no longer clearly think
Or feel
And I cannot be certain
As to what is real
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2004-12-20 19:22:44]
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Re: Confusion
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by Aranonddi on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:03:30 PM AEST
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| Excellent write |
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Re: Confusion
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by BEBE on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:32:41 PM AEST
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| this is an excellent writting. it flowed perfectly, keep up the great work... lol :) |
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Re: Confusion
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:26:47 PM AEST
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| Sometimes life is overwhelming.. good write, |
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