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Your eyes
Contributed by
socialburnin
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:50:19 PM in AEST
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When I look into your eyes
I feel something so surreal
I dont know what it is exactly
But it wakes up something deep inside me
It starts in my heart
And swells in my brain
Creating a surge of something quite insane
Everyone else in the room seems to melt away
And Im left with only you
And those bottomless eyes you own
I could stare forever in them
I dont care how often its been said
But I could swim in them forever
I dont know if you can feel it
Hell I dont even care
Cause when I see you Im in love
I know you dont love me
But if all I can have is your stare
Then Ill have to live with it
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Re: Your eyes
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:53:19 PM AEST
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this was such a beautiful write... it saddens me that this person you are talking about doesnt feel the same... keep your chin up !
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Re: Your eyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:50:39 AM AEST
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I can really really relate, This is such a good poem, but even tho its sad,filled with emotions, Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem,
~Great Write~
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Re: Your eyes
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:31:10 PM AEST
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| this is a good write whether or not you beleive it! see I commented lol and yeah you are a good writer! well keep on posting |
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