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Love Me
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:08:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I need someone.
Someone to love me.
A love that is pure.
And Honest.
Beautiful.
Someone to love the way I look first thing in the morning.
Who holds my hair back when I've had too much taquella.
Someone who loves me when I'm snoring.
Who dances with me in the rain.
Someone who doesn't mind that I dance in my underwear.
Who doesn't mind I wear the same jersey for weeks on end.
Someone who makes me smile when I think about them.
Who climbs through my window at half past two in the morning because they miss me.
Someone who wont make fun of my irrational fear of cannabils.
Who will sing to me when I'm down.
Someone to stay up late with.
To sleep in til lunch with.
Someone to beat me at car racing games.
Who plays snap with me when the powers out.
Someone to hold.
And to hug.
Someone I can have.
The one I already have.
The best one in the world.
Who meets the criteria of this list and more.
The one that has my heart.
And I have his.
This someone...
This bliss.
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Re: Love Me
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:38:55 PM AEST
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this is very touching... everyone in their right mind wants to feel loved... and to give the same respect back to them.. i never thought about some of the stuff that you put into words... great write... and nice imagery ...
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Re: Love Me
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by GKress on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:49:17 PM AEST
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| i like how it progresses from you wanting this person and making the reader think that this person doesn't exist for you to you having this person and appreciating them for everything that they are. |
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Re: Love Me
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by ForgottenTear on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:55:30 PM AEST
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He sounds like the perfect man, haha. I can relate to some of this, and just like you i am in search for that someone. good writing keep it up!
-bex |
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