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Untitled
Contributed by
Blu
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:49:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I
can still
smell
you
on my pillow
and
taste
you
on my breath
Copyright ©
Blu
... [
2004-12-20 17:49:55] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by neglected1 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:41:45 PM AEST (User
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very short.. but to the point... i do have one suggestion though... put more detail into your work and maybe make it a little bit longer... leave somethin for the imagination to pick up...
wonderful attempt though...
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kayan on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:44:22 PM AEST (User
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As always, beautiful. I think the simple style here says it all. Glad to see you're back.
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