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My Injected Life
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:34:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Ripping up the world
just to see how fast it crumbles.
Slashing everything I hoped
and watching security deteriorate.
My life is injected into me
through syringes of misery.
I wait here, lying weakly,
waiting for my flesh to disappear.
Each day I wake I
wait to sink into the folds of the world,
wandering from
nothingness to disappointment and back.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
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2004-12-20 17:34:20]
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Re: My Injected Life
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by Apolla on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:43:33 PM AEST
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| I love this poem because of it's elegant simplicity. I can't tell how much I can't tell how much this poem relates to me, and I know that may be a sappy and predictable line but this poem really seems to reflect me in so many ways. It was a beautiful piece reflecting on my feelings as well as yours I'm sure. |
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Re: My Injected Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:45:36 PM AEST
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| in the words of alan brazil: "top class!" |
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Re: My Injected Life
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:25:39 AM AEST
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| wow, this is heapz good, well done!!!! |
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Re: My Injected Life
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:49:49 AM AEST
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Each day I wake I
wait to sink into the folds of the world,
wandering from
nothingness to disappointment and back.
-very deep. I liked this one a lot. And I agree, I think I am crazier too after the "institution".... |
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Re: My Injected Life
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by bluebird on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:50:21 AM AEST
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this is wic! i ended up walkin outa my institution-well my case rehab but yeah,great write.
~keep the faith~
Bluebird |
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