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Drops of Water
Contributed by
Blu
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:33:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There is a voice
that falls with the rain
like drops of water
it cascades down
darkness
or
some other
impenetrable black
into nighttime stories
and dreams
where children speak
in harsh whispers
of the things to come
things that were or are
and some that will be
those that move slowly
like drops of water
or the lips
of a lover
lips that long
to commune
with divine
or immortal things
wings upon wings
those that live forever
on just a kiss
or a touch of the hand
grazing fingers
and steady gazes
and the absence of light
where such things
are forgotten
and only a breath
can be heard
a breath
that falls with the rain
like drops of water
which cascade down my skin
or some other
impenetrable
dark
Copyright ©
Blu
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2004-12-20 17:33:47]
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Re: Drops of Water
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by Kayan on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:47:48 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. Your imagery is unparalleled much like your talent to capture the emotion you're feeling. I love this piece.
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Re: Drops of Water
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:05:54 PM AEST
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| i agree with kayan. very well done indeed. keep posting brilliance. |
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Re: Drops of Water
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:31:48 PM AEST
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| I like, I like! |
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