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Heart-ache
Contributed by
setting_in_the_sun
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:23:42 PM in AEST
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Gaze into my eyes,
burning embers holding,
lusts deceit.
Isolated in tears,
Falling so constantly.
Ember eyes, so glowing-
Dare not- turn your back on me.
Childish games played,
horrible mistakes made;
make this agony subside!
Forgotten memories, swallowed lies--
Burning embers on my arms,
sliced so deep, now numb.
Made insane by your attempts,
to rid me of all happiness.
You succeeded, are you content?
Continuous, is the pain inside
cutting, scratching, and tearing away my pride.
And I s l o w l y fade to nothingness.
You watch my soul, burning in the embers;
the fire that killed.
All began when you broke my heart.
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Re: Heart-ache
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by Kay-Kay on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:36:22 PM AEST
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this is actually a great poem and i like your word usage
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Re: Heart-ache
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by Blu on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:46:22 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery. i especially like how you use the word burn in a poem like this, pain is cleansing and so is fire. all the best
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