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Alone
Contributed by
Cici
on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Feel so alone
No-ones here
No-ones there
No-one really cares
All I cannot trust
Cause my heart is full of loss
They said they were my friends
But no-one is here
They are just simple words they say
Cruel are all you
Who have entered my heart
And torn it apart
I gave love
But somehow thats not good enough
Now I know there is no true person
I'v learned my lesson
So I apologised
To those who have not been threatened
But yet as hard as I try
Thee unheard cries
Aren't forgotten
The past is still the present
And in the deepness of my heart
The scars remain
Copyright ©
Cici
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2002-11-29 21:00:00]
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Re: Alone
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by FaithHope on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 09:35:14 PM AEST
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This was a sad, but wonderful poem. So full of emotion. Remember you are never alone, God is always there for you. Again wonderful poem, and never forget you are never alone...
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Re: Alone
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by BlackAngel on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 10:52:23 PM AEST
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| I like what you write, you capture what i want to say but can't put into words, We should talk sometime! |
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Re: Alone
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by OreO on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 11:03:28 PM AEST
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This is so sad and beautifully
written. Hope this isn't how you feel
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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