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Sight of Spring
Contributed by
redtempest13
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:08:11 PM in AEST
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This thing goes round from here to there,
Blown in upon the wings of air,
It turns small saplings to big 'ol trees,
It blooms the flowers with colors to please.
Spring is beautiful to behold,
Fill with colors bright and bold,
The sight gives heart to all mankind,
It's much to bad that I am blind!
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Re: Sight of Spring
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by redtempest13 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:25:29 PM AEST
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No one has posted on this poem either. Please tell me what you think....
-Gin- |
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Re: Sight of Spring
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by SugimotoYouki on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:50:13 AM AEST
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oh my..
this is very beautyfull...
just the last line hurts a bit, doesn't it?
I think it's very kind of you to write something like that for her...
no wonder she loved it..
I'd have loved it, too, if I was her..
go on like that.. *smiles* |
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Re: Sight of Spring
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by sweetdemoness on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:53:56 PM AEST
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well this is interesting. I didn't like the rhyming near the end tho. But it all fits in well with the topic of your poem. The begining was beautiful. I almost thought i was outside beaneath a tree for a second...great job.
~sweet demoness~ |
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