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You Stole My Smile

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:39:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You bastard you stole my smile,
Made me believe I was ugly & vile,
Made me hate my reflection,
Brought on my sadness’ resurrection.

I couldn’t stand to look at my naked flesh,
You ***** me up made me such a mess,
I’d hide by the shadows of the night,
Hurt & pain had hold of me really tight.

I’d pile make up onto my skin,
To mask & cover up the hurt within,
I despised the way that I looked,
You stole my innocence from me you took.

The impact you had on me was immense
You made an innocent child into a dirty girl who was tense,
One who hated everyone with such a passion,
Why did you do it, why did it have to happen?

I can never get back the thing you stole,
You made me a shattered & damaged soul,
For that I would like you to rot in hell,
No matter how much I wash on me is your smell.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-12-20 12:39:13]
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Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:55:42 PM AEST
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Such an emotional write. Ain't it funny how people can affect our view of ourselves, even if they're not accurate? I've had the same sense in that the man who repeated to me over and over how beautiful I was - too beautiful to leave - but he left. And so you wonder if the compliments were a lie too. These people have bad karma.


Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:04:14 PM AEST
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There are some sick people in this world Pixie.
Where do they get off on making you feel bad?
They are the ones who are ugly inside and out.
Funny that what you are told over and over can affect you.
So say to yourself how beautiful you are 20 or more times a day make them your affirmations.
You will come to believe it from the depths of your soul

Amazing heartfelt fabulous write

All the very best to you Pixie

Love Sweetangelukxxxx


Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:06:44 PM AEST
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A song just popped into my head

You are beautiful no matter what they say by pink know it? Believe it.



Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by redtempest13 on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:25:58 PM AEST
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Believe me I get where you are comming from. My ex-hubby told me I was pretty, then I got pregnant and he said that he didn't want to see me naked. Just hang in there. That "person" will get what's comming to him.


Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 03:54:45 PM AEST
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Well This was really tough for you I'm sure but we all think your great! So very sorry to hear this! Theres so many of them out there & we never know it till were hurt! Christina


Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:12:46 PM AEST
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Alright, alright. Who did this to you? Where are they? How can I find them? I'll show this one a thing or two. I'll go down a-swingin on this one, let me tell you.
You've certainly achieved an effectiveness with this one, pixie.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea


Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:43:20 AM AEST
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This was very emotional. You did a very good job of telling your pain. I can really empathize with you on this. Excellent write!


Re: You Stole My Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:54:59 AM AEST
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Pix this is so sad and heart clenching. You have displayed your inner true feelings very well with this piece. Great write.

Hugs,
Jane x




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