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Falling Musical Water
Contributed by
dragonluvsong
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:32:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I awaken as raindrops speckle the windowpane with melodic pitches that caress my hearing.
Landing strongly on the roof, are drumbeats of a harmonic line that follows the footsteps of my thoughts.
The decreasing rhythm of the rain brings the yearning for rest back to my weary mind.
I stare out my window to watch the puddles growing on the street.
The green grass becomes covered in a watery blanket of beautiful instrumentation.
A car drives through a small ocean to cause the sudden splash of a climactic final verse.
And the sky brightens in the background as the sun chases away clouds of music makers.
As the musicians flee their perches, which once graced the grand stage of the heavens;
A rainbow conductor stretches across the sky to bring an end to the watery symphony.
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2004-12-20 12:32:38]
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Re: Falling Musical Water
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by pixie on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:01:23 PM AEST
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a lovely poem, really lovely,
pixie xx |
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Re: Falling Musical Water
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:11:06 PM AEST
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This is just gorgeous! Music from the weather, especially rain, always makes for a good subject.
peace
TS |
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Re: Falling Musical Water
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by blueyes11 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:54:37 PM AEST
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| This imagery of this poem is amazing. To think that your imagination could create such a piece is really impressive. You said your poem was inspired by the works of others; this type of poem inspires me to write. This is incredible. 5 stars. |
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Re: Falling Musical Water
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by newewe on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 03:06:46 PM AEST
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| That was fun. It livened my day and gave me pleasant thoughts. Not contrived..............doug |
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