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Disturbed Lands
Contributed by
taintedsoul
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:44:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The steely knives of death
dig deep into giving flesh,
stripping life from limb
until bone lies uncovered.
It has no remorse for its actions –
this is a natural act for this beast.
Ripping flesh for pleasure,
now this is a treat –
to cause agony for no reason.
Delectable!
Blissful laughter is a cacophony
of raven feathers in flight –
to drip red rain upon the faces of those who gawk.
Haunted is the land here,
where angels fear to tread
and dead limbs walk freely
to shed the red life of the living.
4 July 2004
Copyright ©
taintedsoul
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2004-12-20 11:44:13]
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Re: Disturbed Lands
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by pixie on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:54:30 AM AEST
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very good, well expressed dark write,
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Re: Disturbed Lands
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:35:02 PM AEST
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i thought this was very good....and very dark...i liekd it alot....great work
Lots of Love
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Re: Disturbed Lands
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:48:47 AM AEST
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| VERY DARK INDEED BUT DAMN GOOD |
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