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As You Leave
Contributed by
Mangs
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:09:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I want you to hurt
As much as I hurt,
I want you to writhe in pain.
I want you to feel
That your soul has been ripped out
Never to be whole again.
I want you to cry
All the tears that I've shed
Each time that you left me
Alone in my bed;
I want you to die
That slow death that one dies
When they know that the One
That they love has just lied.
Tell me again
How you'll love me forever,
Tell me again
How we'll be, you and me.
Tell me again
That you can't live without me,
Tell me again,
Once again, as you leave.
I want you to hurt
As much as I hurt,
I want you to writhe in pain.
Or if that's too much
For me to be asking
Then I ask you to leave
What little remains.
Leave me my soul,
Though there's not much to salvage;
Leave me to mourn
For the dream that has died.
Leave me alone--let me grieve,
Let me hide.
And this time,
Don't come back
Once you've said goodbye.
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-12-20 11:09:36]
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Re: As You Leave
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by pixie on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:41:40 AM AEST
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a very emotional and dark write, very good poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: As You Leave
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by little_genna on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:42:59 AM AEST
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woah hun the anger from this......
I can feel every emotion in this...
I really wanna just hold you till your pain goes away now....
This is so dark and shows a completely different side to you.
I like it but I definitely prefer the happier side of you...
....I got told today that I look at life in a dark and twisted way...true words said by my dad..
But I can be happy and I just wish to make you smile.....
Hunny go read my poem I wrote about you....
....maybe I will get you to smile....
Love you always
Your dark princess |
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Re: As You Leave
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by Stitch on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:06:06 PM AEST
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Ouch! You can't get much more emotionally heart wrenching than this. Yep, that's just how it feels.
Stitch |
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Re: As You Leave
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:50:54 PM AEST
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this is a great poem....it would probably make a great song too.....i really loved it....great work
Lots of Love
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Re: As You Leave
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:53:49 AM AEST
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Deeply emotional. I enjoyed every word. Great write.
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