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Fallen
Contributed by
crash
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:59:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I had my highs
but then I'd fall
harder than humpty dumpty
up on his wall
I've had my scares
I've had my pains
been plauged with losses
been blessed with gains
My life from past
has been a mess
but the one I'm livin
is the best
everything is in order
my women and my ride
now that I've fallen
I can respect my pride
I was dying
but then I was saved
I had fallen again
then someone showed me how to win
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crash
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2004-12-20 09:59:23]
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Re: Fallen
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by Summerwine on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:09:53 PM AEST
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| Welcome back from your fall... a very good poem, thx Yvonne |
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Re: Fallen
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:35:00 AM AEST
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Great poem. Nice flow.
I'm glad things improved in your life. :-) |
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Re: Fallen
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:33:44 PM AEST
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This is a very well written poem. I like the way you express yourself from a line of downs, to a great point in your life.
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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