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happy marriage
Contributed by
holy
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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congratulate you lovely girl
you said you will get married
I congratulate you from the buttom of my heart heartily
go to meet your new life happily
your and your lover will be the happiest person
in the world since that very day
You say some fear a bit anxious
you say you afraid of far away from hometown day
tell you my bright girl my sweeter friend
after all people want to grow up
leave parents' really independence of our ability
the person who you love is waving
he is your hope and future
love him to cast on others and hold in the arms bravely
take on heavy burden of family with him
love everyone of his house
Don't forget look for aome time some idle
to come back and see own parents
The marriage is the necessity in our life
the best home after being ripe
nobody hopes oneself is lonely all one's life
wish you and lover every day hand in hand
like holding and having each other in all yourselves life
Step into new life as you
rest the head on altogether as you
cuddling together betweent body and bed as you
round the warm family every day as you
in order to every thing of smiling in life as you
you will be happy and satisfied
wishing you and your lover is happy and successful
everything in your new life close to enjoy as one and share
Copyright ©
holy
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2004-12-20 08:31:11]
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Re: happy marriage
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by holy on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:35:09 AM AEST
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| buttom- * -bottom |
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Re: happy marriage
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by holy on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:37:38 AM AEST
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Don't forget look for aome time some idle
dont forget look for some time some idle |
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Re: happy marriage
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by HellsLibrarian on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:08:18 AM AEST
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| It's a lovely sentiment that you're expressing, but there are quite a few grammar and syntax errors that distract from that. |
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Re: happy marriage
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by MMISS on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:10:54 AM AEST
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| that's very sweet! you're such a good friend to write this for her. wonderful poem here!!! |
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Re: happy marriage
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by holy on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:23:43 AM AEST
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Hellslibrarian,welcome you.
very glad you are here and found some wrong grammar and syntax.i will learn more from here ,thank you Hellslibrarian,
nice friend ,welcome to correct them in this poetry ,you can write right here and i will know,i will be happy .
may be i write them in chinese style,haha,i will try my best (*_*)(*_*) |
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Re: happy marriage
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by holy on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:28:35 AM AEST
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hi,Mmiss.
when a friend write me she will be married soon and about some fear of marriage ,i have many words want to tell her ,and i cannot speak english well ,i only try to tell some thing that i think.
friend is bestest teacher of mine ,i love to hear from you.thankful.smile. |
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