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Stillness of Time
Contributed by
Ada
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:27:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Seconds are slowly wasted
Time awaits our parting
I cannot cease to think so
Let this be unreal, oh God!
Let this be a silly dream!
No, I can’t escape this truth
Embracing me soon is cold
Strength, I truly need, dear Lord
Spare me from paralysis
Over sleepless nights, I’ll rest
Far away, you will soon be
Today and the days ahead
I’ll weep for what’s yet to come
Movement of time, if to stop
Each moment be kept for long
Copyright ©
Ada
... [
2004-12-20 06:27:06]
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Re: Stillness of Time
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:44:06 AM AEST
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LOL that was cleverly written, i so know what you mean, i love this. Thanks for posting.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Stillness of Time
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:32:10 AM AEST
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lovely, nicely written and unusual sentance structure which made it all the more appealing.
that was brill x |
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Re: Stillness of Time
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:06:03 AM AEST
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I love acrostic poetry, and such an passionate topic!
Spike |
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Re: Stillness of Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:36:08 PM AEST
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| What "brill x" said...I agree. Very enjoyable. |
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